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[Character Story] Oliver Adams

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1[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 1:30 am

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

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BIODATA
Fullname                    : Oliver Adam Siegfried
Nickname                   : Oliver Adams, Oli, Adams
Place and Date of Birth : Schleswig-Holstein, German. February 29th 1984
Gender                      : Male
Blood Type                 : A
Height/Weight             : 180cm/84kg
Profession                  : Criminal, Assassin
Working With              : White Face Mafia As Capo


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EARLY LIFE
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Oliver Adam Siegfried was born in Schleswig-Holstein, German on February 29th 1984, He came from a rich family. His father is Wilberth Siegfried and his mother is Amelinda Bathisft. His parent was very loving their only son, so they would always give what Oliver wants.

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Wilberth Siegfried and Amelinda Bathisft


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OLIVER AS TEENAGER
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    Oliver grew up with a brilliant minds, he always has many problem solutions to solve his own problems. He has much money, so he could develop his own illegal business in Los Santos. His parent was killed by a Chinese Mafia while He was developing his own business in Los Santos.

    Oliver had everything but Parent. Oliver had everything but friend. Oliver was an Anti-social before he met Leonardo Garcia (An Italian Mafia), Oliver did everyting by himself, but since that time, he realized that he couldn't be stronger in his solitude.

    Oliver joint with Leonardo's black market Trade in the age of 19, Oliver worked in Unlicensed gun creator and seller part, he used his money for the business (Co-operating system business of Leonardo and Oliver) and he began an Assassin after two years.

[Character Story]  Oliver Adams S5lo95
Oliver - Acer - Leonardo
(Leonardo recruited Acer before Oliver joins)



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OLIVER IS ALWAYS BE OLIVER
Oliver joins a Mafia and Criminal Syndicate of Leonardo, unofficial Mafia that doesn't have an officially name. They always wear a White Mask when they are working, people call them "odd white stanger", another call them Masked Mafia So, they named themself WHITE FACE MAFIA

**OLIVER AND THE MAFIA ARE STILL LOOKING FOR THE CHINESE MAFIA WHICH KILLED OLIVER'S PARENT
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UNTOLD STORY
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Oliver was married to Kimberly Sarrah at age of 21, Kimberly was a sexy and very good looking model, Oliver and Kimberly had a beautiful daughter named Olivia Sarrah.

His family was always stick together, Oliver loved Kimberly and Olivia so much, sometime Oliver mind to leave his Criminal world for being always together with his family.

One day Oliver was frustated of near bankrupt, Oliver couldn't control himself, He killed Kimberly by Seven shots on her head, Little Olivie was killed by seven shots on her heart. Seven was past Oliver's favourite number


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Terakhir diubah oleh Oliver_Adams tanggal Sat Jul 11, 2015 8:25 am, total 1 kali diubah

2[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 1:32 am

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Im so sorry for bad grammar and my very bad english Very Happy Very Happy

3[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 2:16 am

Garcia.

Garcia.

Good one

4[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 8:16 am

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Leonardo_Garcia wrote:Good one

Hi Loco, this is our old photo when we were together in police car. Gonna miss our memories
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5[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 8:40 am

Roman_Corona

Roman_Corona

Wajah nya kurang tamvan Very Happy

6[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 8:46 am

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

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Terakhir diubah oleh Oliver_Adams tanggal Sat Jul 11, 2015 7:42 pm, total 1 kali diubah

7[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 8:56 am

Roman_Corona

Roman_Corona

ooh mungkin abis diiputusin pacar nya ya? Very Happy

8[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 9:19 am

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Roman_Corona wrote:ooh mungkin abis diiputusin pacar nya ya? Very Happy

itu beda cerita Very Happy
Kalo udah mandi jadi ganteng gini
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9[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sat Jul 11, 2015 7:40 pm

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Roman_Corona wrote:Wajah nya kurang tamvan Very Happy
Maklum Foto itu di ambil sebelum saya mandi

10[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sun Jul 12, 2015 3:45 pm

ShinKatsuo

ShinKatsuo

Keren bro itu Bayinya...... lol! lol! lol!

11[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Sun Jul 12, 2015 6:11 pm

Rahadi_Wicaksana

Rahadi_Wicaksana

ShinKatsuo wrote:Keren bro itu Bayinya...... lol! lol! lol!
Kagak keren malah kayak binatang seperti kucing,Itu foto LEONARDO GARCIA Lucu banget masa Mafia ditangkep dan skin cemen dipakai ,Kayak shin katsuo

12[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Mon Jul 13, 2015 10:16 pm

Garcia.

Garcia.

Yang di Mobil polisi?itu base FAM gw mau di segel gua belum ke tangkap gua ganti Baju buat nyamar,malah di tangkap

13[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Mon Jul 13, 2015 10:17 pm

Garcia.

Garcia.

Yang di Mobil polisi?itu base FAM gw mau di segel gua belum ke tangkap gua ganti Baju buat nyamar,malah di tangkap

14[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Tue Jul 21, 2015 5:55 pm

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

ShinKatsuo wrote:Keren bro itu Bayinya...... lol! lol! lol!

Emang gaul si Oliver

15[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Tue Jul 21, 2015 5:57 pm

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Kagak keren malah kayak binatang seperti kucing,Itu foto LEONARDO GARCIA Lucu banget masa Mafia ditangkep dan skin cemen dipakai ,Kayak shin katsuo

Jangan ngerusuh di lapak orang.

16[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:31 pm

William_Abrams

William_Abrams

Kritik ya, pak.  bom

- Kalau dipresentasikan dengan detail tulisan, mungkin lebih bagus.
- Grammar, Chap.
- Ask Chief Harry Arthur for grammar help. He's a grammar Nazi Police.
- Buat cerita sedetail and seminimal mungkin. Basic information saja. Pakai [/spoiler] agar cerita lebih rapih untuk setiap Chapter.
- Make it look smart, tertata rapih tapi sedikit lebih bagus daripada berantakan tapi banyak cerita.
- If you want to have a graet one, learn HTML immediately.


Itu semua kritik saya. Coba cek Versi saya:

Oliver "Oli" Adams

White Face Family

The Assasins Capo


Biodata:

Oliver's Biography

Spoiler:

Oliver's will always be

Oliver's.

[insert-something-about-your-family-here].
[WFM Logo]

The untold strories.


Spoiler:

17[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: [Character Story] Oliver Adams Wed Jul 22, 2015 1:32 pm

William_Abrams

William_Abrams

Bonus: Code pengerjaan.


Code:
[center][h2][size=24]Oliver "Oli" Adams[/size][/h2][/center]
[center][h3][size=18]White Face Family[/size][/h3][/center]
[center][h4][size=16]The Assasins Capo[/size][/h4][/center]

[spoiler="Biodata"]
[font=Times New Roman]Name: Oliver Adams Siegfried[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Nickname: Oli, Adams.[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Date of Birth: 29/02/84's[/font]
[font=Times New Roman]Place of Birth: [/font][size=11]Schleswig-Holstein, German[/size]
[size=11]Gender: Male[/size]
[size=11]Blood Type: A[/size]
[size=11]Height: 180cm[/size]
[size=11]Weight: 84kg[/size]
[size=11]Job: Family Capo. Criminal and Asssasins (Optional)[/size]
[size=11]Currently working with: White Face Mafia.[/size]
[/spoiler]
[center][h2][size=24]Oliver's Biography[/size][/h2][/center]
[spoiler]
[h2]The Early Life[/h2]
[b]Oliver Adams, [/b]a [i]blablabla[/i] from [i]blablabla.[/i] He's [i]blablabla[/i], his parent [i]yadayadayada [/i]and his [i]yadablabla.[/i]

[h2]Teenage Life[/h2]
[b]Olive's [/b][i]yadayadayada, blablabla chcken chicken chicken.[/i] [i]Blabla yadayada blabla yada blabla. Chicken blabla kentucky chicken fried rice.[/i]

[b]Oliver's[/b] had everything, [i]except[/i] for his parent. [i]Then again we do yadayadayada and blablabla. Insert the stories here.[/i]
[/spoiler]
[center][h3][i][size=18]Oliver's will always be[/size][/i][/h3][/center]
[center][h2][i][size=24]Oliver's[/size].[/i][/h2][/center]
[center][i][insert-something-about-your-family-here].[/i][/center]
[center][i][WFM Logo][/i][/center]
[h3]The untold strories.[/h3]

[i][spoiler][insert-the-untold-stories-here.][/spoiler][/i]

18[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: Kritik dari Simon Slavoan Fri Jul 24, 2015 4:38 pm

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Makasih Pak Simon dan Harry Arthur atas pengarahan agar rapih dan perbaikan grammar nya! akan diperbaiki jika sudah buka di laptop ahaha Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

19[Character Story]  Oliver Adams Empty Re: Kritik dari Simon Slavoan Fri Jul 24, 2015 4:38 pm

Oliver_Adams

Oliver_Adams

Makasih Pak Simon dan Harry Arthur atas pengarahan agar rapih dan perbaikan grammar nya! akan diperbaiki jika sudah buka di laptop ahaha Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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